One stunning evening when the sun was setting I saw a huge field of amazing and beautiful poppies.
As the wind howled I could feel the strong wind breeze in my hair, I could hear birds chirping amid the wind and the sunset was beautiful.
Then I could hear insects amongst the grass. I could see the dark clouds forming around the sun.
I could see mountains and the sky was a beautiful orangey and yellow colour. The view was as stunning and beautiful as my teacher. I loved to see all those poppies just swaying with the breeze and with the flow. The poppy field made me feel amazingly calm, relaxed and happy.
Ka rawe, great work on your descriptive writing Chastity! I love how you focused steadily on describing in detail. It is awesome that you chose specific words and used figurative language to create a relaxed mood.
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